20 Sentence Story

In class, we have been learning about sentence structure. To have a better sentence structure you 

should use a variety of simple, compound and complex sentences.

We had to write a 20 sentence story that consisted of simple and compound sentences. The simple sentences are highlighted in green and the compound in yellow. Here is mine.

Once upon a time, there was an annoying little 2-year-old. Her name was Bob. Bob liked to play with barbies but no one like playing with her because she was annoying. That was how Bob’s life went until she was 5 and had to go to school. She thought it was boring. Until she met a nice girl called Jeff. Jeff was annoying just like Bob so they got on perfectly. Now Bob liked going to school. Mostly because she had someone to play with now. Bob had a great time at school for years until she was 8. Bob fell out of a tree. She had to go to the hospital because she had fallen from a 20-foot high tree. They thought she was going to die. Jeff was there in the hospital with Bob. Jeff would stay there for ages. She waited 4 months until Bob woke up from her coma. Jeff was so happy. She could play with her best friend now. Bob slowly got better. After a while, Bob and Jeff could be annoying again.