We have been learning about Zero waste for Topic in term 3. I found some interesting facts and statistics. Did you know that scientists have predicted that by 2050 there will be more plastic in oceans than fish? I think its sad that we are losing the marine life because they deserve to live.
Well done, very informative. In the lowest paragraph you should check the punctuation in that one. Overall good job, everything makes sense (Mostly). Nice work.
ReplyDeleteGood work Maia you have some interesting facts, I learnt a lot. You could improve on making the fact down the bottom more visual because i cant really read it, and improve on the punctuation. overall great work.
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